Synopsis

He was a professional English-language writer and editor. He rewrote the text in clear, natural literary English. He preserved the original meaning, style, and approximate length. He did not mention that this was a translation or rewrite. He did not add extra information and he did not shorten the text. He took the provided text and crafted a revised version that reads with a more polished, literary feel. The core message remained intact, but the language was refined for greater clarity