Synopsis

Nick Jordan’s presence stirred something within Diane, a current that might ripple outwards, affecting her ties to Ric. *** **Explanation of choices:** * **"Stirred something within Diane, a current..."**: Replaces the more direct "rocks Diane's world" with a more evocative and metaphorical description. * **"...might ripple outwards, affecting her ties to Ric."**: This clarifies the potential consequences without explicitly stating "may affect her relationship". The phrasing is l